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How the world economy’s reliance on fossil fuels can be reduced to prevent further global warming.

How the UN can help reduce ethnic tensions around the world

How the UN can curb political exploitation of the Earth’s Polar Regions.

How the UN revamps its peach-keeping operations to better meet current challenges.

How the UN helps to alleviate growing economic tensions between China and the West.

How the UN can better gather and distribute aid to victims of natural disasters.

How the UN can help alleviate the condition in poor nations.

How the UN can help solve food problems.   2018年第二回の本番”food security”でピタリ的中!

How the UN can help solve population problem.

How the UN can help poor children in the world.

How the UN can help solve refugee problem.

How NGOs tackle problem.

How the UN can help solve the North Korea’s problem

How the UN can tackle terrorism.

How the UN can implement effective sanctions.



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I will discuss how the UN can help the world achieve gender equality.

First, the UN promotes diffusion of education among women. Without knowledge, experience, expertise given by education, it’s difficult to enjoy an equal treatment in society, often becoming exploited and victimized. However, the fact remains that many women in the world are prevented from having access to education due to cultural barriers, traditions and discrimination. Noting the serious situation hindering gender equality, the UN has stepped up the effort to facilitate education for women through the UNESCO, a specialized organization to the Economic and Social Council, and the relevant NGOs.

Second, the UN leads the world to gender equality, condemning the inequality or unfairness in gender. Where conflicts occur, women too often become the victim of rape, abduction and hostage-taking that disrespect the women’s status. Responding to these atrocities that jeopardize gender equality, the UN has expressly criticized them in various forms including recommendations or joint-communique, which clearly shows what is right and wrong to achieve the fairness in the world.

I conclude that the UN helps the wold gender equality with diffusion of education for women and condemnation on the inequality.





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